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I enjoyed how in depth you went on this topic, as it provides a lot of good background information about the fungal farming systems that are established in terrestrial and aquatic systems! I agree with the statement above, as there are some areas that could maybe be reworded or rearranged for strength. For example, in the Terrestrial systems section the first sentence sounded like it ran on, so you could use a bulleted list of the insects instead of listing them within the sentence! Overall I really enjoyed your page and images! Good work :) - Ethan | |||
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Overall pretty good. Might want to rephrase some sentences to be more formal.
I enjoyed how in depth you went on this topic, as it provides a lot of good background information about the fungal farming systems that are established in terrestrial and aquatic systems! I agree with the statement above, as there are some areas that could maybe be reworded or rearranged for strength. For example, in the Terrestrial systems section the first sentence sounded like it ran on, so you could use a bulleted list of the insects instead of listing them within the sentence! Overall I really enjoyed your page and images! Good work :) - Ethan