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Latest revision as of 11:26, 26 April 2018
Peer Review:
Structure of the section "classification" ended up a little wacky just an fyi Good content overall, only suggestions I'd offer is maybe discuss feeding habits more in depth (unless I missed it) and to possibly reconsider how you rearrange given information (particularly in the intro). Seems like a conglomerate of information thrown at the reader at once. Breaking into smaller, more focused paragraphs or even bullet points could be effective. Good work though, just my opinions.