Talk:Aggregate formation - Revision history

Colineck at 16:18, 26 April 2018

2018-04-26T16:18:03Z

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	There is a sentence in the Macro section that reads : The breakdown of different types of detritus leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition, which impacts the way aggregates form. This reads clunky and is almost a sentence and a run-off.		There is a sentence in the Macro section that reads : The breakdown of different types of detritus leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition, which impacts the way aggregates form. This reads clunky and is almost a sentence and a run-off.
	Consider the structure of this sentence. For example, in my opinion "The formation of aggregates is impacted by the breakdown of different types of detritus because it leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition." is easier to read. Love the content and just offering a suggestion.
			-> Consider the structure of this sentence. For example, in my opinion "The formation of aggregates is impacted by the breakdown of different types of detritus because it leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition." is easier to read. Love the content and just offering a suggestion.

Colineck at 16:17, 26 April 2018

2018-04-26T16:17:10Z

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	There is a sentence in the Macro section that reads : The breakdown of different types of detritus leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition, which impacts the way aggregates form. This reads clunky and is almost a sentence and a run-off.		There is a sentence in the Macro section that reads : The breakdown of different types of detritus leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition, which impacts the way aggregates form. This reads clunky and is almost a sentence and a run-off.
			Consider the structure of this sentence. For example, in my opinion "The formation of aggregates is impacted by the breakdown of different types of detritus because it leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition." is easier to read. Love the content and just offering a suggestion.
	Consider the structure of this sentence. For example, in my opinion "The formation of aggregates is impacted by the breakdown of different types of detritus because it leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition." is easier to read. Love the content and just offering a suggestion.

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There is a sentence in the Macro section that reads : The breakdown of different types of detritus leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition, which impacts the way aggregates form. This reads clunky and is almost a sentence and a run-off.

Consider the structure of this sentence. For example, in my opinion "The formation of aggregates is impacted by the breakdown of different types of detritus because it leads to a high diversity in the stages of SOM decomposition." is easier to read. Love the content and just offering a suggestion.